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Nov 19, '04 12:17 PM
for everyone

I must tell you what I feel now
Before I lost that feel
Before it fade away
: "I miss you, no doubt!!"

Like a commodore hunger the sea
Like a soldier longing a home
Like a warrior need a horse
Like a knight admire a knighthood

(---In Hallucination---)

Hey, what the hell is this???
Don't you love me anymore???
I thought that your love was only for me,
but now I see that there is someone else.
Darling come to me quick,
then I will make you happy,
that you will feel the sky on your silky skin

November 19, 2004

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starssss1826 wrote on Nov 20, '04

ehm... i know who you wrote this for.. ^_^ well, guess wat? buagusssssssss banget!!! hehehe...

jorurikurosawa wrote on Nov 20, '04

so far the poem is very nice...
but actually i don't really like [in hallucination] part
seem don't really connect to the upper part.

the hallucination part sound like the possessive guy that like to force his girlfriend to making love wif him...
hahahahha...

just kidding, maybe i think too much...
hohohohoho....

i think you have a very good talent to make a poem, keep up good work...^^

ichtikhan wrote on Nov 23, '04

ok darling i 'll come to u.....

d3nyeki wrote on Nov 23, '04, edited on Nov 23, '04

ichtikhan said

ok darling i 'll come to u.....

Hei...whats up..pren..
what the hell u write??? hehehe.... im a guy ur not supposed to call : darlin... hehe

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